Good work boys! You have done well with such a long reader's theatre. You obviously followed the text well as you all knew when it was your turn. Over the week when you practice, work on changing your tone to suit the mood of the text. Also think about 'rhythm' - slowing down and speeding up to suit the text. At times you needed to slow down as it became a bit of a mumble. Remember clear voices all of the time. Andrew you did a great job reading 2 parts. Help each other get your parts correct as some of you are reading your words incorrectly and it doesn't make sense. I liked the voices you used to go with the characters. Remember to use the punctuation as this helps with meaning and helps the text flow.
Great work i think all of you did a great job of reading this play i like how i could understand you taking and you didnt laugh and mak around when you did it
Nice work you done very well on the jack and the beanstalk readers theatre I could here you very clear I think something you should work on is to stop pausing in every word you say and you need to speak louder.
Good work boys! You have done well with such a long reader's theatre. You obviously followed the text well as you all knew when it was your turn. Over the week when you practice, work on changing your tone to suit the mood of the text. Also think about 'rhythm' - slowing down and speeding up to suit the text. At times you needed to slow down as it became a bit of a mumble. Remember clear voices all of the time. Andrew you did a great job reading 2 parts. Help each other get your parts correct as some of you are reading your words incorrectly and it doesn't make sense. I liked the voices you used to go with the characters. Remember to use the punctuation as this helps with meaning and helps the text flow.
ReplyDeleteGreat work i think all of you did a great job of reading this play i like how i could understand you taking and you didnt laugh and mak around when you did it
ReplyDeleteNice work
ReplyDeleteyou done very well on the jack and the beanstalk readers theatre I could here you very clear
I think something you should work on is to stop pausing in every word you say and you need to speak louder.
This is a good story.I think you need to talk louder . Andrew was a good narrotor.
ReplyDeletevery good use of punctuation but you should maybe stop pausing after each word.
ReplyDeletewell done boys you used very good punctuation and didnt laugh.You spoke nice and loud and i could understand you.
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