The beginning of your script has been written well Anthony, but you seem to be missing the end of the fairy tale. Remember when you read you need to use your voices to entertain the listener. Change your pitch, tone and rhythm to hook the listener in.
great work but i coulded really hear you only when billi and ray speak and maybe dont yell at the end and anthony you mite need to talk louder next time because i coulded hear you
well done, all of you were great but i think you need to work on using a clear voice
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ReplyDeletegood work guys I think you could stop yelling but still sounds very good.
ReplyDeleteThe beginning of your script has been written well Anthony, but you seem to be missing the end of the fairy tale. Remember when you read you need to use your voices to entertain the listener. Change your pitch, tone and rhythm to hook the listener in.
ReplyDeletegreat work but i coulded really hear you only when billi and ray speak and maybe dont yell at the end and anthony you mite need to talk louder next time because i coulded hear you
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