Thursday, March 27, 2014

Show Don't Tell

Today in writing we learnt about 'show don't tell'.  Luke had to act out the word 'anxious'.
This is how he showed that he was anxious:
# Hugging himself tightly
# Clenching his jersey/fists
#  He is on his tippy toes pulling away from the activity
#  He is protecting his body and shielding it with his arms
#  Pursed lips
#  Pale
#  Shaking
#  Butterflies in my tummy
#  Sweaty palms



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